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by Red Wolf

"That better be your hand." Rose couldn't quite see.

Jack wiggled even closer. "Right hand's on red, left hand's on yellow and this would be so much more fun naked."

Rose collapsed in a heap, handing victory to Jack. Again. She picked up the box, examining the graffiti. "Who's Blake, why is he a wanker and what are fondue rocks?"

"You'd have to ask the previous owner." The Doctor shuddered; some past indiscretions were best forgotten. He stopped his tinkering and took a sudden interest in the game before Rose asked for details. "Now, I believe someone mentioned naked Twister."

Doctor Who 100 — challenge #76: lost causes

Published Babble Horde — 13.07.2005
Published Doctor Who 100 — 13.07.2005
Published A Teaspoon and an Open Mind — 14.07.2005
Published fanfiction.net — 14.07.2005

Comments

and this would be so much more fun naked

::snickers:: I wonder how many men have used that for a pick-up line... — via LiveJournal — posted by IrishVampire13 at 02.08.2005 20:59 AEST |

I wonder how many men have used that for a pick-up line...

Most of them — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 02.08.2005 21:01 AEST |

A demo of my dirty-mindedness since I met my guy: I might have to try that line on him; it actually sounds kinda fun — via LiveJournal — posted by IrishVampire13 at 02.08.2005 21:01 AEST |

I'm more curious if it ever worked. hehe! — via LiveJournal — posted by Michael Smith at 02.08.2005 21:07 AEST |

I'm guessing that's a no from you then, Mikey — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 02.08.2005 21:08 AEST |

Never tried that particular line. Though I do agree with it in many cases — via LiveJournal — posted by Michael Smith at 02.08.2005 21:08 AEST |

LOL. Brilliant — via LiveJournal — posted by Elen Ancalima at 02.08.2005 21:11 AEST |

Thank you! It called for silly — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 02.08.2005 21:11 AEST |

It did. My silly idea hasn't been able to work itself onto paper yet... ::sigh:: — via LiveJournal — posted by Elen Ancalima at 02.08.2005 21:11 AEST |

Mmm, Captain Jack...

Oh sorry, I should be saying something about your fic! ;)

...this would be so much more fun naked.

That's very Jack. I think sometimes writers forget that he's a bloke and attracted to girls as men. If I read one more fic where Jack and the Doctor are just automatically lovers — well, perhaps I just shouldn't read them, eh? ;)

It tickled me when the Doctor appeared. I'd expect everyone to have to behave, as he's the authority figure, but he suggests naked twister.

Great fun! — via LiveJournal — posted by Grandmum at 02.08.2005 21:12 AEST |

Naked Twister was a distraction to answering Rose's questions. And it was much more pleasant. No one really wants people finding out they've committed the future equivalent of 70s fashion disasters — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 02.08.2005 21:13 AEST |

Bother! I thought there was going to be group sex. Still, such is life. ;) — via LiveJournal — posted by Grandmum at 02.08.2005 21:13 AEST |

I suspect there will be group sex. But then I can't really imagine what else naked Twister could lead to — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 02.08.2005 21:14 AEST |

"Right hand on red, left hand on yellow and this would be so much more fun naked."

Damn, that line's been stuck in my head all morning, ever since I read your drabble. It's just so Jack — via LiveJournal — posted by Elen Ancalima at 02.08.2005 21:14 AEST |

I have created an earworm. Yay!

At least it has smutty overtones and (hopefully) doesn't make you want to hunt me down in retaliation — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 02.08.2005 21:15 AEST |

Ha! Do you really say earworm in English? The word exists in German (Ohrwurm), but I've never found an appropriate word in English. (Though I usually say earworm anyway ...)

And yes — just the right amount of smutty overtones — via LiveJournal — posted by Elen Ancalima at 02.08.2005 21:16 AEST |

I suspect earworm was appropriated from German, that's what English does best — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 02.08.2005 21:17 AEST |

You're right (Wikipedia: earworm). Very funny, and I thought it was just one of our Denglish inventions (Deutsch-English) — via LiveJournal — posted by Elen Ancalima at 02.08.2005 21:17 AEST |

Now, I can see Jack dropping whatever he might be doing to play naked twister in a heartbeat, but the thought of the Doctor... scary and more than a little bit wrong.

Jack's first line was just so very very Jack — via LiveJournal — posted by shebit at 02.08.2005 21:18 AEST |

There are times you'd do anything to not have your embarassing past revealed. This is one of them — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 02.08.2005 21:19 AEST |

So much fun! — via A Teaspoon and an Open Mind — posted by Liz at 02.08.2005 21:39 AEST |

lmao! picked me up at work, this one did. i love that your fics are tiny, but really cheer me up — via LiveJournal — posted by Pheral at 03.08.2005 19:58 AEST |

Thanks!

I have a longer still in head bit planned based on your whumping request. But the current 15 Minute Ficlets challenge is proving problematic to kickstart it. And it keeps getting longer and the major whumping is at the end — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 03.08.2005 19:59 AEST |

mwaha, i've inspired a monster-fic eh? Major whumping can be at the begining, the end, the middle, the edge, the outside or the top for all i care. HooRAY! Write on, MacDuff, i shall await — via LiveJournal — posted by Pheral at 03.08.2005 20:00 AEST |

You are right naughty, you are ;-) — via LiveJournal — posted by Whisper's Echo at 03.08.2005 20:05 AEST |

Thanks! — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 03.08.2005 20:05 AEST |

I loved it. Short and sweet, perfect as a drabble. You rock! — via fanfiction.net — posted by TheLilyAmongstTheThorns at 03.08.2005 20:12 AEST |

naked Twister? That sounds like an interesting propsoition, for those 3... ;) — via fanfiction.net — posted by Slayergirl at 14.08.2005 14:49 AEST |

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