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Luminous

Luminousby Red Wolf

The Doctor heard Jack and Rose bickering long before they returned. "Oi! Hold it down." He broke into a grin when he saw them walk through the door.

Jack was wearing Speedos, a pair of negative handprints on his chest and a sunburn of almost radioactive brightness.

"Fall asleep in the sun, Jack?"

"She did this to me." Jack pointed at Rose.

"He got fresh with the sunscreen." Rose bit back.

Jack glared and stalked off to the medical bay.

The Doctor watched him go and turned back to a smirking Rose. "Should be fun when he sees his back."
Doctor Who 100 — challenge #77: lucky

Published Babble Horde — 19.07.2005
Published Doctor Who 100 — 19.07.2005
Published A Teaspoon and an Open Mind — 30.07.2005
Published fanfiction.net — 30.07.2005

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Poor Jack! He hasn't become the new Xander who always gets picked on, has he? :) — via LiveJournal — posted by Jessica at 07.08.2005 15:59 AEST | #
Jack has not become my new Xander, I just had the urge for childish bickering and retaliation — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 07.08.2005 16:00 AEST | #
So much fun! Ow. Poor Jack! — via LiveJournal — posted by Jane Davitt at 07.08.2005 16:00 AEST | #
I'm not a fan of the sunburn, but hand print bikini top marks are funny. Provided it's not you who's stuck with it — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 07.08.2005 16:01 AEST | #
hehe, evil rose — via LiveJournal — posted by Pheral at 07.08.2005 16:01 AEST | #
And to think she was surprised at Jack's wandering hands when she asked him to help with the sunscreen — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 07.08.2005 16:02 AEST | #
Why? What's on his back? — via LiveJournal — posted by Moonbeam at 07.08.2005 16:04 AEST | #
Whatever you like. People always assume something worse than I could come up with, so I'll leave it up to your imagination — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 07.08.2005 16:05 AEST | #
Yeah, poor Jack — though I'm sure it served him right! So what did that little minx do to his back? :O — via LiveJournal — posted by Grandmum at 07.08.2005 16:05 AEST | #
She was decorative with the sunscreen, what she did, however, is up to your imagination — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 07.08.2005 16:06 AEST | #
::cringes and recalls my recent sunburn:: Poor fellah — via LiveJournal — posted by IrishVampire13 at 07.08.2005 16:06 AEST | #
Been there, done that, with sunburn. Way too many times. At least poking at computers encourages you to stay inside out of the evil orange ball of fire in the sky — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 07.08.2005 16:07 AEST | #
True. Still... can't go swimming in the CPU... — via LiveJournal — posted by IrishVampire13 at 07.08.2005 16:07 AEST | #
well, you could, but it'd make an awfully sharp bikini... — via LiveJournal — posted by Ankhet at 07.08.2005 16:08 AEST | #
Bwahahahaha!

Oh, Rose... Now that is what I call revenge. :-D — via LiveJournal — posted by Elizabeth Culmer at 07.08.2005 16:13 AEST | #
And you're pretty much stuck with the results until the tan fades. Unless you try the fake tan and get orange handprints instead — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 07.08.2005 16:13 AEST | #
So funny, and on character for the series. Well done! — via LiveJournal — posted by Jose Cruz-Rojas at 07.08.2005 16:14 AEST | #
So funny, and on character for the series. Well done! — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 07.08.2005 16:16 AEST | #
Should be fun when he sees his back. ::chortles:: — via LiveJournal — posted by Genevieve at 07.08.2005 16:17 AEST | #
Sunscreen torture, the gift that keeps giving — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 07.08.2005 16:17 AEST | #
::giggles helplessly:: — via LiveJournal — posted by Elen Ancalima at 07.08.2005 16:18 AEST | #
Looks like my work here is done — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 07.08.2005 16:18 AEST | #
Ahh great — I want to see his back !!! — via LiveJournal — posted by dawn at 07.08.2005 16:19 AEST | #
You'll have to chase him down and apply something soothing to his sunburn to find out — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 07.08.2005 16:20 AEST | #
I'm still giggling. Very cute, without being overly so — via LiveJournal — posted by steviesun at 07.08.2005 16:24 AEST | #
Pleased to have amused you — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 07.08.2005 16:27 AEST | #
Ouch, that's got to hurt! I like drabbles. This one was very funny, but I do feel a pang of empathy for Jack. Sunburn is not good! But I'll imagine Rose and the Doctor making it up to him though. Yogurt on the skin can help with sunburn... sorry, I'm just visualising that :-) I do like this fic! — via fanfiction.net — posted by The Lily Amongst The Thorns at 14.08.2005 15:18 AEST | #
Funny! — via fanfiction.net — posted by Mark at 14.08.2005 15:19 AEST | #
Hehehe, very nice. I liked the ending — via fanfiction.net — posted by Uh.yeah at 29.09.2005 16:20 AEST | #
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