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Entwine

Entwineby Red Wolf

"What do you think you're doing?"

Dawn gyrated, hands above her head, hips swaying to the beat. "Dancing."

"Can see that. You're wearing my shirt."

"Uh huh." She leaned over, sliding her hands down her shins to touch her toes.

"Thought we had an understanding about the evil of boy bands." He snagged the remote and blipped through the tracks until he hit Squirrel Nut Zippers.

Swinging her into his arms, Spike showed her real dance moves.

They finished with Dawn's legs wrapped around Spike's waist in a way that proved his shirt was all she was wearing.

"Punish me."
Jossverse Drabbles — challenge #59: punishment

Published Babble Horde — 09.05.2004
Published Jossverse Drabbles — 09.05.2004
Published fanfiction.net — 10.05.2004
Published Forever Fandom — 10.05.2004
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Published The Slayer's FanFic Archive — 04.08.2004

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Dawn goes too far sometimes ::grin:: Lots of fun — via LiveJournal — posted by Jane Davitt at 10.05.2004 11:17 AEST | #
I don't think Spike's complaining — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 10.05.2004 11:17 AEST | #
Okay, loving you even more now for the SNZ reference. Not to mention, sexy sexy drabble! — via LiveJournal — posted by Willa at 10.05.2004 11:19 AEST | #
It can only be fitting that the song chosen is Hell — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 10.05.2004 11:20 AEST | #
Oh yes! Spawnie, naughty Spawnie! I'm loving it—it's chocolate! Yummy! — via LiveJournal — posted by Murielle at 10.05.2004 11:20 AEST | #
Mmm... And just like chocolate, it melts in your mouth — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 10.05.2004 11:21 AEST | #
*purrs* It's in times like this when I worship you. Funny, cute and sexy. Whee! Been quite some time since you wrote shamlessly non-subtext D/S. ;) — via LiveJournal — posted by Leni at 10.05.2004 11:22 AEST | #
I think there was one other drabble that I thought was non-subtext, but the non-Spawners thought it was friendship. Oh well, to each their own obsession — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 10.05.2004 11:24 AEST | #
Hmm... this is just yummy — via LiveJournal — posted by Vixen at 10.05.2004 11:24 AEST | #
There does seem to be a distinctly edible theme running through the comments. Chocolate covered Spike and Dawn for all — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 10.05.2004 11:26 AEST | #
Oh, my... *distracted by mental images of Spike gyrating* — via LiveJournal — posted by Dawn S at 10.05.2004 11:45 AEST | #
Don't know if you're familiar with Squirrel Nut Zippers or not, they're a swing band. Check out the dance scene at the club in Blast from the Past for an idea of the dancing and the music — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 10.05.2004 11:55 AEST | #
Ooh. Love this. It's always nice to see Spawn. :-) — via LiveJournal — posted by Anne at 10.05.2004 12:58 AEST | #
Thanks. It's always fun to write Spawn — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 10.05.2004 12:58 AEST | #
Dawn's become quite the bold little thing, hasn't she? Very hot — via LiveJournal — posted by a2zmom at 10.05.2004 14:10 AEST | #
Hasn't she just. Thanks for reading — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 10.05.2004 14:11 AEST | #
They finished with Dawn's legs wrapped around Spike's waist in a way that proved his shirt was all she was wearing.

*blinks* Wow. Am very impressed by Dawn's nerve. Am also madly jealous that she has Spike there to dance with — via LiveJournal — posted by Elizabeth Culmer at 10.05.2004 14:48 AEST | #
In my head there was relationship, so this is not Dawn seducing Spike out of the blue, but with a word limit not everything makes the cut — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 10.05.2004 14:49 AEST | #
Very much loving this. *now has images of Spike gyrating* — via LiveJournal — posted by Calex at 11.05.2004 11:15 AEST | #
Squirrel Nut Zippers are swing, baby. Picture Spike in the Brendan Fraser role in the club in Blast From The Past. Much hotter than gyrating — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 11.05.2004 11:17 AEST | #
Oh God. *fans self* — via LiveJournal — posted by Calex at 11.05.2004 11:18 AEST | #
More More More! It is very good — via fanfiction.net — posted by Michelle Anne at 11.05.2004 11:32 AEST | #
oh thats very nice... please write more — via fanfiction.net — posted by biro1 at 11.05.2004 11:39 AEST | #
So funny and sexy in just 100 words! this drabble is fantastic! :) — via LiveJournal — posted by enn_enn at 11.05.2004 11:55 AEST | #
So pleased you enjoyed it — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 11.05.2004 11:55 AEST | #
oh yeah, now *that* was nice. i especially liked the last line.

thanks for review! — via fanfiction.net — posted by Just Wolf at 17.05.2004 12:28 AEST | #
the ending was really good! Loved it! — via fanfiction.net — posted by Nightshadow at 24.06.2004 22:10 AEST | #
PLEASE UPDAT PLEASE PLEASE! — via fanfiction.net — posted by Illiterate Anonymous Coward at 06.07.2004 16:09 AEST | #
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