by Red Wolf"So, the chicken for you," Andrew pointed to Dawn. "And the beef is for you." He pointed to Rachel. "Shouldn't be too long."
"Take the umbrella with you—" Rachel's words were cut off as Andrew slammed the door in his haste to leave. "That boy will drown out there."
"Not quite, he'll just end up looking like an adorably bedraggled puppy." Dawn snorted in amusement. "Why do you think he shot out the door so fast?"
"Don't tell me he's on the pull?" Rachel groaned at Dawn's enthusiastic nodding. "I guess we won't be seeing our lunch any time soon."
Jossverse Drabbles — challenge #161: april showers
Published Babble Horde — 24.04.2006
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andrew wells | dawn summers | fan fiction | fiction | london | rachel evans
Andrew understands the power of cute and helpless. Must be nice to use it to his advantage for once instead of being demon bait — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 01.10.2007 20:37 AEST | 
Hee — makes me want to towel Andrew off — via LiveJournal
— posted by spuffyduds at 01.10.2007 20:38 AEST |
Sounds like his plans are working already — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 01.10.2007 20:38 AEST |
Ah, Andrew being sneaky and cute and in need of a handsome stranger's umbrella. :-) He probably shouldn't do that when Dawn and Rachel are waiting for their lunch, though...
Minor suggestion: to help show that Andrew cut Rachel off by running away, you might want to punctuate the dialogue with a dash (
Minor suggestion: to help show that Andrew cut Rachel off by running away, you might want to punctuate the dialogue with a dash (
Take the umbrella with you—) instead of a period. It's not a grammar point, just a stylistic quibble — via LiveJournal — posted by Elizabeth Culmer at 01.10.2007 20:39 AEST |
At least they know him well enough to predict his behaviour patterns and will grab lunch elsewhere instead of waiting for him.
Punctuation fixed — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 01.10.2007 20:40 AEST |
Punctuation fixed — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 01.10.2007 20:40 AEST |
Always like how you show the sly side of Andrew in this series — via LiveJournal
— posted by Jan at 01.10.2007 20:40 AEST |
Thanks. I like him having some kind of life, rather than being a house pet — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 01.10.2007 20:41 AEST |
On the pullis term used to refer to the act of looking for a bit of action in the partner stakes — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 01.10.2007 20:45 AEST |
Oh, ok who's the lucky man? — via LiveJournal
— posted by kitmarlowescot2 at 01.10.2007 20:46 AEST |
Oh, good, I was able to read the comments and not have to ask what
Now that I think about it, I'll bet they'll be fighting over him, both male and female — via LiveJournal — posted by Mark Hunter at 01.10.2007 20:46 AEST |
pullmeant.
Now that I think about it, I'll bet they'll be fighting over him, both male and female — via LiveJournal — posted by Mark Hunter at 01.10.2007 20:46 AEST |
I'm sure he'll be up to his eyebrows in people wanting to rescue him from the rain — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 01.10.2007 20:47 AEST |
It's a fine line between nerd and sensitive cute guy — via LiveJournal
— posted by Mark Hunter at 01.10.2007 20:47 AEST |
Poor hungry girls. huge sucker for the wet look myself but in an actual shower kind of way :D — via LiveJournal
— posted by mad_jaks at 01.10.2007 20:48 AEST |
Maybe someone will drag him off and throw him in a proper shower — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 01.10.2007 20:49 AEST |
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