by Red WolfSpike and Dawn crouched awkwardly under the console of the first unlocked vehicle they'd found, freezing as their pursuers passed the car
"What did you think you were doing?" Spike whispered as he finished hotwiring the ignition and started the engine.
"Did you see the big guy go down when I hit him?" Dawn glanced out the rear window; the demons had heard the engine start and were heading back towards them.
Spike slammed the car in gear. "Gerlop demons have glass jaws, but travel in large packs. What have you learned from this?"
"Don't heckle Gerlop demons?"
"Good girl."
Word of the Day 100 — challenge: heckle
Jossverse Drabbles — challenge #115: numbers
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dawn summers | fan fiction | fiction | spike
Thanks. I could see the situation as a learning experience — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 09.06.2005 21:16 AEST | 
::laughs:: The way Dawn swivels from jubilant to chastized is funny. Great job with the word — via LiveJournal
— posted by Chessie at 09.06.2005 21:16 AEST |
It's funny where some words take you — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 09.06.2005 21:17 AEST |
They are adorable and, it seems, something of a bane on the local demon population — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 09.06.2005 21:19 AEST |
I love the slightly skewed viewpoint they both display in their
Dawn glanced out the rear window, the demons had heard the engine start and were heading back towards them. That's a run-on. Change the comma to a semi-colon — via LiveJournal — posted by Elizabeth Culmer at 09.06.2005 21:20 AEST |
lessons. No worries about any moral issues, just watching your back. And Spike hotwiring cars is always a good thing. :-)
Dawn glanced out the rear window, the demons had heard the engine start and were heading back towards them. That's a run-on. Change the comma to a semi-colon — via LiveJournal — posted by Elizabeth Culmer at 09.06.2005 21:20 AEST |
I'm not a fan of political correctness, it tends to overlook human behaviour and it's just dull.
Got the fix. Many thanks — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 09.06.2005 21:20 AEST |
Got the fix. Many thanks — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 09.06.2005 21:20 AEST |
Thanks! Spawn is always fun to play with — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 09.06.2005 21:21 AEST |
Wonderful! I love your series with these two! — via LiveJournal
— posted by Jan at 09.06.2005 21:22 AEST |
Thanks! Sometimes things fall into place in odd ways; it's nice when the challenges lead me off in unexpected directions — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 09.06.2005 21:23 AEST |
Always nice to have provided drabble amusement for someone — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 09.06.2005 21:25 AEST |
Oh wonderful — I love me a good SpikenDawn fic, and this was definitely one! :) — via LiveJournal
— posted by lillian morgan at 09.06.2005 21:36 AEST |
At least Dawn learned for the experience — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 10.06.2005 19:49 AEST |
Don't heckle Gerlp demons... LOL, very nice — via LiveJournal
— posted by Virtual Personal at 10.06.2005 19:51 AEST |
It's one of those learning on the job kind of things — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 10.06.2005 19:52 AEST |
"Don't heckle Gerlop demons?"
"Good girl."
Ahh love Spike's version of life lessons! And Dawn's pride in her punch! — via LiveJournal — posted by sunnyd_lite at 10.06.2005 20:00 AEST |
"Good girl."
Ahh love Spike's version of life lessons! And Dawn's pride in her punch! — via LiveJournal — posted by sunnyd_lite at 10.06.2005 20:00 AEST |
I like the practical side of dealing with life on a Hellmouth. You can run around like a headless chook, or you can learn to live with it — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 10.06.2005 20:00 AEST |
Again, good characterization in a few words. I wonder if Dawn will really learn her heckling lesson, though. :-) — via fanfiction.net
— posted by Mark at 11.06.2005 16:16 AEST |
Spike is a better brother than Buffy's a sister. That's the way of teaching somebody. Not with shouts and commands but letting them have their own experiences. I love this:
"What have you learned from this?"
It's so Spike! And you made it with only one sentence!!!! Grrrr... Can I be jealous??? Please, let me... — via The Bloody Awful Gutter — posted by Sandra Patterson at 11.06.2005 16:23 AEST |
"What have you learned from this?"
It's so Spike! And you made it with only one sentence!!!! Grrrr... Can I be jealous??? Please, let me... — via The Bloody Awful Gutter — posted by Sandra Patterson at 11.06.2005 16:23 AEST |
I hope Dawn does have an extended lifespan due to being the key. She will need it to learn all these lessons. Personally I think she likes the instructor :D — via LiveJournal
— posted by Sandra Strait at 11.07.2005 15:56 AEST |
Certainly makes a change from the usual life lessons. And always nice to have a sympathetic (and hot) instructor — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 11.07.2005 15:56 AEST |
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