by Red WolfDavid took his tray to the back of the cafeteria, far away from the on-going furore.
He poked suspiciously at his lunch, it was brown and lumpy, further than that he couldn't say. Sighing in resignation, David reached for his drink, but the carton was hit by a stray orange. Chocolate milk splashed over his shirt.
It was the last straw. Pushing the tray aside, David grabbed a weapon and stalked into the crowd.
When security finally arrived to disperse the troublemakers, they made an unexpected discovery. It was the first time they'd seen an eye removed with a spork.
IrishVampire13 — challenge: food fight
Published Babble Horde — 20.04.2005
Published FictionPress — 23.04.2005
fiction | horror | original fiction
It was the first time they'd seen an eye removed with a spork.
Eiouw! Love it! :D — via LiveJournal — posted by Grandmum at 25.04.2005 18:22 AEST |
Eiouw! Love it! :D — via LiveJournal — posted by Grandmum at 25.04.2005 18:22 AEST |
Thank you, that particular imagine wouldn't leave me alone until I wrote it — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 25.04.2005 18:22 AEST |
Simultaneously ew and funny! ::hugz:: I love it; thanks much! Certainly glad that the fights back in junior high never got as bad as that! — via LiveJournal
— posted by IrishVampire13 at 25.04.2005 18:24 AEST |
David was trying to stay out of it, but it seems they missed the warning about being wary of the quiet kids. Happy to hear you liked it — via LiveJournal
— posted by Red Wolf at 25.04.2005 18:25 AEST |
I found this entertaining for such a short piece. I can only imagine what you would do if you had 500 words to work with. Good job, keep writing — via FictionPress
— posted by Mike at 25.04.2005 21:46 AEST |
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