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Alley 07: Raining Blood

Raining Bloodby Red Wolf

Dawn ran after her sister, but Buffy had Slayer skills and was soon lost to her. She had little choice but to search the hard way, starting from the centre of town and spiralling out.

In the end she heard them long before she saw them. The preliminaries were over and Buffy had gotten down to the business of working out her frustrations with her fists.

"Stop it!"

Buffy looked up in surprise, Dawn held a crossbow aimed at her heart.

"Step away from Spike."

"You don't understand."

Dawn helped Spike to his feet, backing away from her sister.

Jossverse Drabbleschallenge #54: tori amos: raining blood

Published Babble Horde — 05.04.2004
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Awesome. Dawn-defender-of-virtues. :) — via LiveJournal — posted by Tori Morris at 06.04.2004 09:58 AEST | #

She is quite the protector — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 06.04.2004 09:59 AEST | #

Ooh, the plot thickens. I didn't expect that. Tense. *munches on popcorn* — via LiveJournal — posted by Rhonda at 06.04.2004 10:00 AEST | #

I did need to have Dawn catch Buffy in the act, rather than just cleaning up after her. And as Buffy only seems to understand violence, I thought the crossbow would make Dawn's point nicely — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 06.04.2004 10:01 AEST | #

For some reason, reading Alley!verse and eating ritz crackers is a perfect way to start the day. I can't believe I actually used to like Spuffy. ::sigh:: Season 6 is teh evol. Still loving, and I like how protective you're making Dawn in this !verse — via LiveJournal — posted by MAC at 06.04.2004 10:02 AEST | #

I'm glad I'm providing a nice start to your day. I like my protective Dawn too — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 06.04.2004 10:02 AEST | #

Oh, *yes*! Now my Monday looks better. Get 'er, Dawn! — via LiveJournal — posted by Willa at 06.04.2004 10:03 AEST | #

Thanks. You're so easy to please, all it takes is threatening Buffy with a crossbow. Maybe I should have considered the railgun — and I really should stay away from lovely violent video games — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 06.04.2004 10:04 AEST | #

*imagines a lovely, shiny, sharp bolt in that crossbow and just smiles...* — via LiveJournal — posted by Willa at 06.04.2004 10:05 AEST | #

Very nice! — via LiveJournal — posted by taeli at 06.04.2004 10:06 AEST | #

Thank you — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 06.04.2004 10:07 AEST | #

Uh, silly question, who says You don't understand? 'Cause it fits both Spike and Buffy,

Wonderful Dawn, protecting what's hers — via LiveJournal — posted by Leni at 06.04.2004 10:08 AEST | #

It's Buffy's line. Spike isn't really up to speaking after she hammered him — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 06.04.2004 10:08 AEST | #

I liked this... how Dawn had to figure out how to find them the hard way as well as how she stepped up and protected what she wanted. Nice work — via LiveJournal — posted by Belinda at 06.04.2004 10:09 AEST | #

Buffy isn't known for being reasonable.

This is part the Alley!verse. Dawn has already tried talking it out, it didn't go well, so she went for something that Buffy would understand — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 06.04.2004 10:10 AEST | #

I enjoy tough as nails Dawn. A very interesting direction for her character — via LiveJournal — posted by a2zmom at 06.04.2004 10:11 AEST | #

Thanks. I like a strong Dawn — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 06.04.2004 10:12 AEST | #

Very interesting take on Dawn — I like :) — via LiveJournal — posted by Fluffy Battle Kitten at 06.04.2004 10:13 AEST | #

Pleased you enjoyed — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 06.04.2004 10:14 AEST | #

I like it. Glad someone finally stood up for Spike! — via LiveJournal — posted by Kristina at 06.04.2004 10:15 AEST | #

Spike has shown little interest in standing up to Buffy, somebody has to — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 06.04.2004 10:16 AEST | #

Yay! Go Dawn!! — via LiveJournal — posted by Flurblewig at 06.04.2004 10:18 AEST | #

Dawn will save the day — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 06.04.2004 10:18 AEST | #

Aha! about time someone intervened in the nasty abuse Buffy piled on Spike. A very satisfying read. ;-) — via LiveJournal — posted by sottovoce10 at 06.04.2004 11:17 AEST | #

I thought it about time too — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 06.04.2004 11:21 AEST | #

Ah, sweet little Dawn with a crossbow...girl's got some ovaries! — via LiveJournal — posted by Romany at 06.04.2004 17:57 AEST | #

That she does — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 06.04.2004 17:58 AEST | #

"...girl's got some ovaries!"

This I'm going to remember. In fact, I'm going to write it down. I have a close but small circle of friends you'll hear cheering where ever you are when I share this with them. ;-)) — via LiveJournal — posted by Murielle at 19.04.2004 09:22 AEST | #

Dawn to the rescue! Love it! — via LiveJournal — posted by Murielle at 19.04.2004 09:23 AEST | #

She's not a knight in shining armour, but I think Spike is beyond the age when he thought fairy tales were real too — via LiveJournal — posted by Red Wolf at 19.04.2004 09:24 AEST | #

Oh, but can't you just *hear* what he'd say if a knight in shining armour showed up? LOL! — via LiveJournal — posted by Murielle at 19.04.2004 11:00 AEST | #

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